Our language teacher, Pilar Pando, told us to do a crime story. Here’s my story:
It was a gloomy night. It had been raining heavily. It was late and I was walking home alone when a man of a horrible aspect surprised me.
Firstly he asked me the time, and when I took out my cellphone he grabbed me from the wrist strongly. He kidnapped me! I tried to ask for help, but there was no one in the streets except for the two of us. He was much stronger than me, so I couldn’t get away. He took me to an abandoned house that was at the end of the street. In there he took all my belongings. Then he started to take out my clothes, I resisted, so he hit me violently till I bled.In conclusion he raped me.
In the morning he sent for a ransom to my parents. He had me tied to a chair. Thankfully he fed me. Also he let me to watch a little bit of news. I spent two whole days with him.
Fortunately they found me before paying. The day when they found me, they sent me directly to the hospital, my parents went to see me, and my father made sure that horrible man stayed in prison for a long time.
Good work! Well done! Remember to divide into paragraphs next time. Pilar